Esha’s adapted paragraph from Theseus and the Minotaur

The strong, fearless Prince Richardos of Amarcois knew that a deal was a deal. However, he also believed it was wrong to send anybody, especially young children, to be eaten by the Hongsataur. Prince Richardos knew he could kill the Hongsataur, so he marched to his father proudly (the king) and told him all about it. His father said he couldn’t, so they started arguing until they agreed. The rince promised that he would change his picture on his flag from the Hongsataur to a sword if he survived.


4 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Miss Moxon
    Sep 25, 2014 @ 19:10:35

    What a great paragraph. Well done!



  2. Sheetal (Esha's mummy)
    Sep 25, 2014 @ 19:17:17

    A proud mummy moment for some beautiful writing put up on the blog!



  3. maryam
    Oct 28, 2014 @ 12:44:31

    i love your paragraph its amazing!



  4. Helaenah
    Nov 09, 2014 @ 20:18:17

    Esha i love your paragrph



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